Writing a personal statement, letter of recommendation, scholarship or fellowship statement is a reflective process. It requires one to be thoughtful about why one has engaged in professional experiences as well as intentional about what one has learned.
In general these documents should discuss how the applicants' pursuit of their goals has informed their career paths and ideally how their goals align with the mission and values of the organization they're seeking to join.
We recommend that applicants work closely with their school advisors, faculty members and skilled writers who know them well, to help them review and edit their documents.
The Office of Career and Professional Development does not review personal, fellowship or scholarship statements. Students looking for additional help with these statements can find a list of resources below.
General Writing Resources
For anyone experiencing the most common writing issues, including, but not limited to; trouble with the writing process, organization, clarity, grammar, mechanics, punctuation, and how to cite sources, the Purdue OWL Writing Lab is an excellent resource.
Medicine Personal Statement Resources:
Writing Your Personal Statement
Dentistry Personal Statement Resources:
Writing Your Personal Statement
Additional Personal Statement Samples
Dissected Personal Statements
Online Statement Review Resources:
While OCPD doesn't not endorse any copy editing service, students could perform a google search for copy editing to find proof readers. It is every student’s responsibility to research and validate their options so please make sure to engage in due diligence if contracting any service. Below is a list of criteria to consider if a student chooses to look for a proof reading service, (Please also note that per the UCSF policy of student conduct and discipline, any form of academic dishonesty will result in disciplinary action per section 102.1):
Letters of Recommendation Resources:
Fellowship, Research, and Scholarship Resources: